2019-02-03 00:53:23 when someone has the time, could you go through https://adocs.toastin.space/user-handbook/0.1a/Working/apk.html ? 2019-02-03 00:53:46 I'm looking specifically for comments regarding accuracy (i.e did I write anything flat out wrong), style etc is for the editing section once user-handbook is content complete 2019-02-03 00:54:13 also, AinNero: think that mention of update-conf is sufficient? (I recall you asked for it to be included) 2019-02-03 00:54:57 yes 2019-02-03 00:55:03 :) 2019-02-03 00:55:37 whats your native language? 2019-02-03 00:55:52 that's a very complicated question in my case 2019-02-03 00:56:03 English is the one I'm most proficient with, and the one I use every day 2019-02-03 00:56:08 it's also the one I've used the longest 2019-02-03 00:56:25 grammar feels a bit unusual 2019-02-03 00:56:26 but, technically, the FIRST language I learned was Russian - we immigrated very early in my life though, I don't remember much of it 2019-02-03 00:56:44 ah, i know some bits of russian from memes 2019-02-03 00:56:48 my english is mostly of the kanuk variant 2019-02-03 00:56:54 so that could be it eh? 2019-02-03 00:57:38 dont know 2019-02-03 00:58:01 the main awkward phrasing I can find is the filename bit 2019-02-03 00:58:07 also, i appreciate the affort 2019-02-03 00:58:09 *effort 2019-02-03 00:58:21 but I've mostly been focusing on being feature-complete right now - as I mentioned, editing will come after that 2019-02-03 00:58:37 (at which point I'll probably take a break, and then move on to developer-handbook) 2019-02-03 00:58:52 alright 2019-02-03 00:59:29 ... and I immediately find a "by default" redundancy, but still only looking for actual inaccuracies right now 2019-02-03 01:00:19 I also live in the French part of Canada (though in the English part of the French part), so that might potentially contribute a bit 2019-02-03 01:00:34 though most of my communication is done through the internet anyway, which could be said to have its own dialect 2019-02-03 08:18:43 SpaceToast: https://tpaste.us/vbK5 2019-02-03 08:26:28 There is no section regrading repository pinning (what you call repository tags) but you do refer to it. maybe still in the queue. 2019-02-03 08:35:04 SpaceToast: i think it looks good. still missing some things but i guess that will be added later. I tried to only comment on the things written down not what was missing except if it was referenced. 2019-02-03 08:36:25 SpaceToast: and thanks a lot for putting time and energy into this, highly appreciated! 2019-02-03 14:47:34 clandmeter: thanks for the feedback! I'll fix all of that and go for round 2; I *am* looking for feedback re: things that are missing, just not style/etc :) 2019-02-08 05:00:12 clandmeter: went over your concerns, updated version here: https://adocs.toastin.space/user-handbook/0.1a/Working/apk.html 2019-02-08 05:00:35 still avoiding doing the editing pass until content-completion (which isn't too far away :) ) 2019-02-08 05:01:19 thankfully, I can do the openrc one on my own, given greater familiarity (and overall simplicity of the concepts, at least from a user-standpoint) 2019-02-11 21:51:29 yesterday, I finished writing openrc.adoc - I'll be committing that shortly, and starting the editing cycle ( \o/ ) 2019-02-13 17:57:54 Any news on ui? 2019-02-13 17:58:19 unfortunately not, settermj keeps saying he wants to help but I'm not seeing anything get done 2019-02-13 17:58:30 if nothing happens by the time the editing cycle's over, I'll start writing it myself 2019-02-13 17:58:54 (speaking of, do you know who designed alpinelinux.org? I might talk to them to get some design decisions out of the way) 2019-02-13 17:59:25 Yes i know him 2019-02-13 17:59:52 Nice guy 2019-02-13 17:59:59 You know him too 2019-02-13 18:00:08 is it you? ;) 2019-02-13 18:00:17 ;) 2019-02-13 18:00:22 :) 2019-02-13 18:00:36 if so, good job on it, it looks very nice 2019-02-13 18:00:46 Thx 2019-02-13 18:01:06 Though not the logo but you know that already 2019-02-13 18:01:08 yeah 2019-02-13 18:01:21 due to the nature of the docs quite a few changes will likely be needed, but it'd be interesting to have some shared CSS, potentially 2019-02-13 18:02:08 Ok it's pretty simple design 2019-02-13 18:02:20 Mostly pure css 2019-02-13 18:02:33 The name 2019-02-13 18:03:11 https://purecss.io 2019-02-13 18:03:22 aha 2019-02-13 18:03:34 I'm used to using bulma (https://bulma.io/) 2019-02-13 18:03:40 I'll look into pure though, to make it fit in more 2019-02-13 18:03:49 (assuming settermj doesn't come through) 2019-02-13 21:05:04 i like purecss due to its size 2019-02-20 02:33:16 ncopa: setup-{alpine,interfaces} doesn't do anything with ipv6 as is now (as far as I can tell); should I mention it in the docs? I'm thinking of just adding a NOTE mentioning SLAAC and that DHCPv6 will require a more complete dhcp client (e.g dhcpcd) 2019-02-20 07:35:07 SpaceToast: yes, that sounds good